Hello

This is my first uploaded movie. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=osiAy8nwudY
The Plot:

What are these drone characters?
The year is 2067. Earth has been thrown into war (known as WW3). But this isn't a war against countries and leaders. The war is human versus human.

40% of the Earth's population (Population: 7.5bn) have been taken and modified into human/cybernetic 'drones'. This began as an experiment to lengthen the lifespan of humans, and create artificial body parts and organs for the sick by a man named Proffessor Earnest Fletch. The experiment began to go wrong when drones began to question their own existance. It didn't take them long to decide that their purpose in life was to improve themselves and everything around them. To become perfect
The drones began to 'improve' their creator, then themselves, then they went on to the rest of their planet. Soon, hundreds among thousands of humans (and animals) were taken for improvement. A year later, the rebellion began, and so did WW3. The drones began space travel in 2069, by developing weapons that would shoot down passing starships and steal their technology.

Okay. How does Starship 777/This Pilot Episode fit into this?
Starship 777, an alien vessel is passing through the outskirts of Human Space in the year 2075. A small drone saucer detects them, and attempts to 'improve' them.


That's an interesting concept. But come on, that episode I just watched really sucked!
That's because it is only a pilot episode, to see what I need to improve on.

So, what do you think of this pilot episode? Do you like the concept? What can I improve on?

At the moment I'm working on a dramaticcy trailer to generally sum up the series. Expect that to be a whole lot better than the pilot episode.